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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 14, 2006 20:23:13 GMT -5
(Still aboard the Flagship) ??: If anyone here wants to live, you will do as I say. *Walks over to the Admiral’s command post* *Kicks Makar’s body out of the way* Also, don’t try to send distress signals, as the computers are jammed. *Places the bridge on lockdown* 2nd Bridge Worker: Umm, Sir? I guess? Who are you? ??: I am the shadow that defies death. I am the Eagle that cannot fall. I am ArwingAce92, best pilot in all of Lylat, and one of the Elite FMF Squadron’s Arwing Division. 2nd Bridge Worker: But, your ship was eliminated by our wave beam technology! Ace: It was? Then why am I the C.O. of your ship now? 2nd Bridge Worker: It’s beyond me. How did you jam our computer system? All of our networks are encoded and guarded. Ace: I’ve answered enough questions, and I’ve proven my ability to do the impossible enough already. For now, just sit back and enjoy the ride. 3rd Bridge Worker: Eh? Hold on, you don’t know how to control this ship as this is a new Venomian control set-up and a brand new ship class. Ace: Enough! Silence! No one else question me! I’ve restrained myself enough to allow y’all to live up to this point. Do not make me make this bridge a graveyard! 3rd Bridge Worker: Sir! *Returns to his seat and turns to his computer* Ace: Good. *Looks over the large bridge and notices everyone is watching his every move* *Ace smiles* *He looks down at the Admiral’s computer and sets its system to monitor the computer of the third bridge worker* 3rd Bridge Worker: *Thinking that he is unseen, tries to send an emergency distress signal to Venom High Command* Ace: *Watches the bridge worker type his distress call* *Is amused* 3rd Bridge Worker: *Tries to send the signal, but is blocked due to Ace’s jamming signal* *Tries to hide his surprise at being blocked* Ace: *Looks up from computer* Hmm, so you wanted to test my word. Not wise. *Whips out laser pistol and kills 3rd Bridge Worker with a single shot and puts the weapon away as soon as it came out* 3rd Bridge worker: Gak- *Dies* Ace: I do hope I won’t have to do that again. Now, can we all sit at ease? I do despise having to hold hostages, but it is a necessity in this particular mission. Now, just allow me to work in peace. *Closes 3rd Bridge Worker’s computer display, and brings up the propulsion system.* *In Venomian Armada’s Ex-airspace* *This occurs directly after Ace gets “shot down”*Pilot: Ace!! What happened to him! Galyk: No! We lost him! Pilot: ^%$#!! Well, he’s gone. Let’s go reinforce Rai and his crew. Galyk: Wait! What about the Cruiser? It got Ace, but we still need to destroy it. Pilot: No. It’s too strong. We’ll return to take care of it later. Galyk: …Okay. They probably need the help. *Jets off to Katina Base* Pilot: *Speeds to Katina Base* *Katina Base* Tyk, Pmac, and Sabor: *Land at the spaceport of the base* Cornerian Aircraftman: It’s great to see y’all here! We have reports flooding the A/V system reporting an entire Venomian Division just outside our lines. Sabor: We know all about it. That’s what we’re here for. *Draws twin sabers* I need to get down there so I can put these to use. Tyk: *Draws a huge laser rifle with a 200x zoom scope* You get me there, and I’ll take ‘em out. Pmac: *Draws two fully-automatic concussion pistols, like Ace’s, but not laser* Gimme some Venom scum! Cornerian Aircraftman: Go into that hangar over there, and you’ll find a vehicle to get you to the war zone in record time. *The FMF ground-pounders go into the hangar and find…* Sabor: Hoverounds!?!?! (Sorry, I needed some comic relief) Tyk: What? Pmac: Forget it; they’re attacking as we speak! *They all pile into the hoverounds and take off for the frontlines* *At the Venomian LZ* Col. Ulf: No! They took over the Flagship!! Makar is dead! Venomian Grunt: Sir! What happened? Col. Ulf: Never you mind. Tell the troops to move out. We need to maintain as much surprise as possible. Venomian Grunt: Done! *Issues the order to the individual commanders* *At the Cornerian Lines* Commander Allen: Troops! Listen up! We have half of a Venomian division heading for our position. Now, I know Venomians, and I know that these people will follow orders to their death. However, if they have no orders, then they fall into disarray. We have the elite FMF squadon backing us up. If y’all’ll direct your attention to the sky… *Rai’s Arwing streaks by overhead* Cmdr. Allen: …Then you’ll see our first bit of air support. Three other ground battle veterans from the FMF squad are en route now. They have their best pilots in orbit of this planet defending it from the Venom Cap ships. Your mission: Hold the line until the reinforcements arrive. Cornerian Troops: *A huge cheer goes up* Cmdr. Allen: Now take your battle stations! The enemy will strike soon!
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 14, 2006 20:24:44 GMT -5
Now, I got a little foreshadowing to do here. Sorry, Rai, but that Arwing ain't gonna stay all pristine and shiny for long.
Anyway, Ace lives, but how?
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Post by blacksabor on Oct 14, 2006 21:02:31 GMT -5
That was good Ace keep it up and i know how you did it but i'll keep it to myself
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 14, 2006 21:25:42 GMT -5
Hahaha, I'm beginning to think that Ace and Sabor are too much alike. They both use swords, chaos emeralds, and do the impossible. And that's just before breakfast.
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 17, 2006 18:33:05 GMT -5
Lemme see here, is it time for another Update?
Alter Ego: Yes, Ace, you're getting slow. Ace: Shut up! Alter Ego: No! Ace: You son of a-! *Ace starts fighting himself* Rai: *Walks by* What the-? *Walks away fast*
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 17, 2006 18:34:42 GMT -5
*At the Venomian LZ* *The Venomian troops move out at a breakneck pace* Col. Ulf: Move! We have to start this attack! Venomian Grunt: Sir! We have a five minute march until we are in sight of the Cornerian lines. Col. Ulf: Excellent. Now, tell the men to- *Is blinded by a blast of lasers* Rai: Hahaha! Take that Venom scum! *Pulls sharply up and makes another pass* Col. Ulf: Gah! Cursed fighter! Quickly, Ack-Ack troops, shoot it down! Anti-Air troops: *Open fire on Rai’s ship with shocking accuracy* Rai: %$#!! *Is rocked by the fire* I’m gonna get myself killed if I stay here!* *Rai boosts back to the Cornerian lines* Col. Ulf: Shoot! They know we’re coming now! Men, faster! Move! *At the Cornerian Lines* Cmdr. Allen: Anytime now, men. Be ready. Rai: *Streaks back over the Cornerian lines, his engine smoking* Cornerian Grunt: Sir! That was a FMF ship! They must be almost here, and heavily armed if he came back so soon and so banged up! Cmdr. Allen: You’re right. Men, dig in deeper! They may be stronger than we thought. *The first Venomian troops come over the hill and become visible to the Cornerian Garrison* Cmdr. Allen: Corneria, strike! Col. Ulf: Loyal Venomians, the enemy is in sight! Attack! *Both sides open fire at the same time*
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 17, 2006 18:36:33 GMT -5
Well kids, that's the last update I written, so I'm gonna have to get back to work...
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Post by blacksabor on Oct 17, 2006 19:54:55 GMT -5
but....ace!!!!!! *whines*
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 18, 2006 17:11:00 GMT -5
Kwitcherbellyachin'! I'll have more soon enough.
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Post by blacksabor on Oct 19, 2006 6:29:11 GMT -5
Hurry up! lmfao
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 19, 2006 14:12:27 GMT -5
I'm goin', but I'm a busy guy! Good things come to those who wait.
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Post by blacksabor on Oct 20, 2006 6:22:24 GMT -5
>_> *waits*.........................................ok i waited! now story?
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 20, 2006 20:17:59 GMT -5
Ace: *Pulls out SCE* Chaos.....FAN-FIC!!!!!!! *Nothing happens* @#$%. Well, I guess not.
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Post by blacksabor on Oct 21, 2006 9:20:28 GMT -5
*cries* i h8 that
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 22, 2006 7:50:17 GMT -5
Ace: Lemme try that again. Chaos........FAN-FICTION!!!!!
*Black Bull warps in* *He starts chasing Ace*
Ace: Gah!! Shoot! It didn't work again! *Runs away*
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Post by blacksabor on Oct 22, 2006 14:26:28 GMT -5
chaos is lucky that he came back before a ate that thing
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Jan 22, 2007 8:27:48 GMT -5
Okay y'all, stand back. This time, I'm for real! I actually have...
AN UPDATE!!!!!!!! Whoop, okatu! I tied up some loose ends here, and made Ace a bit more sinister than he usually is. But, Ace does what Ace has to do...
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Jan 22, 2007 8:29:38 GMT -5
*In Katina’s Lower Atmosphere*
(Author’s Note: I’m updating this for the first time since October. I dunno what got into me. Anyway, I just realized that Galyk is still alive in this story. Hmm. I get the strange feeling that something terrible may just happen to him…)
Galyk: Pilot, what’s our ETA for the front lines?
Pilot: About five minutes. Rai is already in the fray, and Tyk, Pmac, and Sabor are en route on the ground.
Galyk: Good. *Glances at radar* Hey, why is the Cruiser increasing speed and heading towards the front lines?
Pilot: It is doing what!?! But, a Cap Ship is useless in atmospheric fighting. Unless…
*Wheels start to turn in Pilot’s head*
Pilot: *Thinking to himself* Could it be? Maybe, Ace isn’t dead? His homing beacon never turned on, which means that either he was completely vaporized by the Cruiser, or…he somehow boarded the Cap Ship! During stealth mission training in the Cornerian Space Force Academy, our squadron was taught to never use the beacons in occupied territory for fear that the enemy would pick up its signal. I do know how to see if it is Ace in that flagship. */thinking*
Galyk: Unless what?
Pilot: That ship may be planning a suicide attack on our forces. Fly your ship closer to the Cruiser and do a sensor sweep.
Galyk: On it! *Flies over to the Cap ship*
Pilot: *Thinking again* A sensor sweep will put him just inside the range of the Cruiser’s longest range, but weakest laser system. A Venomian wouldn’t be able to even damage an Arwing at that range, but if Ace is in control, then he could aim a shot right at the tiny crystal that powers an Arwing’s lasers. Few pilots, even the ones that fly Arwings, know about that weakness. Hehehe, why would Ace want to destroy Galyk, you ask? The whole squadron senses animosity between the two, but I am the only one that knows why. A few years ago, before we got our own base, Galyk tried to override his orders so that he would get a promotion above Ace’s rank, but it went awry, and Ace’s arm was shattered in the process. So, Ace doesn’t like Galyk. But, even if it is Ace, how the @#$%^& did he take the ship? Those ships have gallons of security!!! */thinking*
Galyk: Beginning sensor sweep. Gimme about 25 seconds.
*Aboard The Venominan Flagship Devastation*
Ace’s computer’s speaker: …about 25 seconds.
Ace: That’s more than enough time for me. Pilot must have read my moves perfectly. I must remember to thank him. *looks up* Weapons officer!
Venomian crew member: Sir!
Ace: Bring up the long range snipe laser.
Venomian crew member: Why? There are no more Allies—er…Venomians for you—in the area.
Ace: Just do it!
Venomian crew member: Uhh, done.
Ace: *Lines up the shot to the millimeter at the underside of Galyk’s Arwing, just behind the tip auxiliary laser orifice* Fire.
*A single, tiny red laser flies out from a small turret on the underside of the Cruiser’s horizontal stabilizer, and connects with Galyk’s Arwing*
Galyk: Gah! I’m hit! Pilot! That ship isn’t supposed to be able to hit me from here!!
Pilot: Galyk, boost out and charge your lasers! In other words, do the standard evasive maneuver.
Galyk: *Boosts fine, but when he tries to charge the lasers, the damaged crystal overloads and the ship bursts into flames*
Galyk: Aaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! *The Arwing completely disintegrates, leaving a small debris cloud*
Pilot: Yup, that’s Ace. *Opens link to the Venomian Cruiser*
*Aboard The Venominan Flagship Devastation*
Venomian Communications Officer: Sir, incoming transmission from an Arwing Class Space Fighter registered to the FMF Squadron, specifically—
Ace: Shut up and patch it through.
*Bridge screen ext to Ace’s position comes on*
Pilot: *static* This is ArwingPilot28, Arwing Sqaudron Commander, FMF Squadron. Your ship is infringing on Cornerian Airspace. Turn back at once, or face dire consequences.
Ace: Well, you just come aboard and we’ll talk it out over tea. How’s that sound?
Pilot: Ace, you sly dog! I didn’t think you could die that easily.
Ace: It looks like you read my playbook like it was written on your HUD.
Pilot: @#$% Straight I did! Now, I’m gonna save me some gas. You got the situation under control there?
Ace: Yup, only one mutiny, which my auto-pistol quelled rather quickly.
Pilot: You have one heck of a cold streak running through you. You sure you ain’t related to Wolf O’Donnel?
Ace: Just come aboard, and we’ll talk then. Besides, we got a battle to drop in on!
*Just outside the Battlefield, Katina Surface*
Sabor: Speed it up, I hear gunfire up ahead!!
Tyk: This thing don’t get any faster!
Pmac: Well, maybe we’ll show up in time to influence the battle.
Sabor: We better!
*Rai’s battered Arwing flies overhead*
Tyk: About this “influencing the battle” deal, well, if Rai’s ship is any indication, then we have some work to do.
*The hoverround pops over a hill and the crack squad of ground-pounder finds themselves looking over the battlefield. The Cornerian Garrison is fighting hard, but the Venomians are overrunning the Cornerians by sheer numerical superiority*
Tyk: Y’all know what to do! *Pulls out the sniper rifle, and sets up shop in a tree* I’ll pick off the heavy hitters and the brass. Y’all take the grunts!
Sabor: *Draws sabers* With pleasure!
Pmac: *Cocks and loads the pistols* Locked and loaded!
Tyk: *Sees a Venomian badger with a flamethrower torching a Cornerian pillbox* Now, that’s just cheap. Well, so is this. *Fires off a shot into the fuel tank, causing an explosion that takes out the Flamethrower user and the grunts around him*
Sabor: *Runs into the Garrison and jumps off of a wall into a group of Venomians* ‘Sup, losers?
Grunt: Huh? *Is sliced*
Cmdr. Allen: *Watches Sabor* Cornerians, Rejoice! The FMF Squad is here!
*The Cornerian troops rally, and start to fight harder due to better morale*
Pmac: *A Venomian grunt finds his way into the compound and begins to level his gun at Cmdr. Allen* *Pmac walks up and taps the Venomian on the shoulder*
Grunt: Shhh! I’m trying to—
Pmac: *Levels the Grunt with the pistol handle*
Cmdr. Allen: Thanks. Y’all got here just in time.
Pmac: The rest of the air support seems tied up. They’ll get here soon.
Cmdr. Allen: These Venomians have some kinda anti-air units. Your lead, umm, what’s his name?
Pmac: Rai, yeah, we saw. But, he’s an amateur compared to the guys we have left. Well, two of them, anyway.
*Sabor continues to kick some serious tail, and Tyk continues to take out choice targets. Pmac joins the fray soon after.*
Cmdr. Allen: *A loud rumble arises in the distance* What the heck is that!?!
Cornerian Soldier: Sir! Our front line units are reporting a column of Venomian armored units approaching fast!
Cmdr. Allen: @#$%!!!!!!! *Aboard The Venominan Flagship Devastation*
Pilot: *Docks his Arwing in the fighter bay nearest to the Bridge* Ace took this ship single-handedly. *Shakes head* Hahaha, I don’t get how he can do what he does.
*A Venomian escort meets Pilot*
Pilot: *Immediately drops to his knees and draws his side-arm*
Venomian Solider: Stop! We’re allied! Well, sort of. We’ve been captured, I guess you could say.
Pilot: *Rises, but doesn’t put away the sidearm* Good. Y’all lead me there.
*They walk to the bridge*
*The bridge door opens*
Ace: *Is on the intercom to the engine room* Yes, 180% throttle! Aim directly for the battle at 54”X, 72”Y, 12”Z! Now! *Slams receiver down* Venomian idiot…
Pilot: Well, Ace, you still have your temper.
Ace: Pilot, good to see you! We have about 4 minutes before we have to get off.
Pilot: What do you mean, “have to get off?”
Ace: You’ll see. *Hands Pilot a cup* Tea?
*Battleground, Cornerian Garrison, Katina Surface*
Tyk: *On a radio* What!?! A tank column!! @#$%$!! My rifle can’t do a blasted thing against them!!
Pmac: *On the other end* Yeah, well, my pistol ain’t much better. But, we have no anti-armor weapons!
Tyk: Whose oversight was that?!?
Pmac: I dunno, but they oughta hang ‘im!
Sabor: *Runs inside and wipes of his sabers* Pmac, it’s straight-up chaos out there!!
Pmac: No kidding. What do we do about the tanks? They’ll be here in about 4 minutes.
Cmdr. Allen: Bah, we may have to fall back, as much as I hate to say it. *A screen in the comms room lights up*
Cornerian Comms Specialist: Commander! Incoming message from the Venomian Flagship.
Cmdr. Allen: What? Are they going to ask for surrender? Never!!
Pmac: Sir, you may consider patching it through. We can always hang up.
Cmdr. Allen: True. Put it through.
Ace: *Cracklestatic* Come in, Cornerian base! Do you read me?
Cmdr. Allen, Pmac, and Sabor: Ace!!?!?!?! WTF!?!!?
Ace: Yup, it’s me.
Pilot: *Pops on screen* And Pilot!
Cmdr. Allen, Pmac, and Sabor: What is going on here!!
Ace: Relax. We captured the ship. Your air support is going to come through big time!!
Sabor: How?
Pilot: Just retreat to the HQ that you landed at. Get all friendlies the heck outta this garrison!
Cmdr. Allen: Why? We got important documents here!
Ace: Well, they won’t be here for long when we’re done with it.
Pmac: Umm, guys, should we trust him?
Sabor: I don’t know why not. Besides, those tanks will be here in 3 minutes. Let’s move out.
Ace: Good move. Retreat now! Oh, and look up. *The link is cut*
All: *Look up* *They see a red dot in the sky, slowly getting bigger*
Cmdr. Allen: What is that?
Sabor: *Figures out Ace’s plan* Holy @#$!!! Commander, don’t worry about Ace. You just better get your boys outta here NOW!!
Pmac: Huh? *Sabor grabs his arm*
Sabor: Come on! Let’s go! ASAP! *The Cornerians start to retreat to the HQ*
Sabor: *On the radio* Tyk, get outta there!! Get to the HQ NOW!!!!
Tyk: Why? And, what’s that big red thing in the sky?
Sabor: I’ll tell you later, just move!!!
Tyk: Okay, just—holy! Lookie here! *Cuts radio link*
Sabor: Yo, Pmac, Tyk must have a good shot. He cut the link to line one up.
Pmac: Well, he better start moving. The tanks will be here in 2 and a half minutes. And why is that red thing getting bigger?
Sabor: You haven’t figured it out yet? That red thing is the Cruiser that Ace and Pilot took! They are gonna ram the garrison, and destroy the entire Venom Force!!
Pmac: What! Are they gonna bail out?!?
Sabor: We’ll find out in a few minutes!
Meanwhile…
Tyk: *Looks through the scope* Ooooh-yeah! You’re about to meet your maker buddy! *Tyk is watching a tall wolf in an officer’s uniform standing tall on the lead tank* Hmm. That must be their commander. Col. Ulf, if I remember correctly. A Venomian Airborne expert. Not for long, he ain’t! *Fires off a shot* *Ulf falls off the tank, but the column doesn’t slow down*
*Tyk’s radio crackles on*
Sabor: Tyk!! You on the move yet?
Tyk: Yeah. I just took out their Commander.
Sabor: Perfect!!! Hold on, we are almost at your position.
Tyk: I see the hoverround. *Cuts link*
Sabor: Yo! Hop on!
Tyk: *Jumps on*
Pmac: Now, let’s get the heck outta here!!
*Inside the Venomian Tank Column*
Venomian Tank Leader: They may have gotten our leader, but we have their base! Troops! Rifle through every drawer in here! Find all the info you can!
Grunts: Sir! On it!
*All the Venomian troops go inside the base, oblivious to the incoming danger*
*Aboard The Venominan Flagship Devastation*
Ace: Pilot, we got one minute to get way outta here.
Pilot: To the hanger!!
Ace: Yo, Venomian idiots!! I appreciate your good behavior, but this is where I get off!! *Locks all computer imputs*
Venomian bridgeworkers: What! But you said—
Ace: I said nothing. A bit of advice: in war, only worry about your own hide. Protect yourself at all causes. Now, I must bid you adieu.
Pilot: *After Ace catches up in the hanger* Man, you really need to work on your compassion.
Ace: This is war.
Pilot: *Hops in Arwing* Those are living beings.
Ace: *Gets in the side-seat* Bah. Let’s fly. *The Arwing jets out of the hanger, 30 seconds before impact*
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Jan 22, 2007 8:31:33 GMT -5
Okay, that's 5+ pages of pure updated goodness. Gimme some comments now! You may want to review the rest of the story to remember what we are talking about.
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Post by blacksabor on Jan 25, 2007 7:29:42 GMT -5
*laughs* *wipes a tear* hoverrounds! lmao i havn't heard that in while i would update my story but i didn't detail it enough and it turned to mush so i re-started it again........i should post it soon..............wow back when everyone was active....those were good times.....you must have been REALLY bored for posting that much!
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Jan 25, 2007 17:45:06 GMT -5
Yeah. Really bored. But, I needed to bring it to the present. By that, I mean kill off Galyk. What did you think of Ace's method of offing Galyk?
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