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Post by ArwingAce92 on Jul 21, 2006 11:15:24 GMT -5
Hey Fed members! We're back with the 2nd edition of the Free story series. I'm not going to start this one, but I will give out some Ideas. Anyone can post, but don't make really radical changes. I'll try not to get as protective on this one as I did the other.
Now, Ace is currently missing. Rai is currently in court. And everybody else is currently outside of the Armory in Chaos' house in TN. The Black Shadow escaped from Templetron before he died and is still floating around, looking for someone to possess, hopefully a troll. Now, let's hear the next installment, not by me:
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Post by foxhound on Jul 21, 2006 11:23:33 GMT -5
I'll Put some stuff In it! Im very creative when it comes to This! But I got no time today (Very Busy) But I'll be posting some cool stuff to the story!
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Jul 21, 2006 11:30:33 GMT -5
That's fine. I'll be pretty busy this weekend too.
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Jul 21, 2006 12:22:07 GMT -5
Ummm... Pmac. That one won't work. Ace is missing!!!!!! Didn't you read the criteria I posted?
1st sentence, 2nd paragraph. This is a direct continuation of the 1st one. One of the major plot elements is finding Ace.
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Post by pmac on Jul 21, 2006 12:30:19 GMT -5
oko here we go
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Jul 21, 2006 12:30:28 GMT -5
It is new. Just... It follows the old one... I think.
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Post by pmac on Jul 21, 2006 12:35:35 GMT -5
TWILIGHT MUSIC PLAYS evryone looks a TYK Fed: Shut UP! TYK: i like it.... Sabor: well looks like we have to start looking for ace. Pilot is making out with his chick Pmac:1. Get a Room 2. We dont have time for this! Pilot: go...ahead.....without....me....(between kisses) hound: loser they hit the road. this is what they had for transportation Pmac: a non electric scooter from toys r us Sabor: A Ferrari Hound: one of those orange cars that everyone had when they were little WILL THEY EVER FIND ACE?  ? DO THEY LIKE SWIMMING CAPS??? FIND OUT NEXT! |
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Jul 21, 2006 12:41:53 GMT -5
That is much better! I gotta go, so bump the topic at GFAQS and I'll update this in a few.
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Post by ArwingPilot28 on Jul 21, 2006 15:46:46 GMT -5
very well done, but why did everyone tell tyk to shut up ? and i also liked how u added me makin out with my girlfriend ;D, good job *gives standing ovation* |
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Post by pmac on Jul 21, 2006 21:59:25 GMT -5
yes yes
tyk was the one playing the gay music
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Jul 22, 2006 11:49:43 GMT -5
I'll update it. I have had an Idea for this one burning in my head for two days now, so here goes:
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Jul 22, 2006 12:31:45 GMT -5
Pmac: Where are we going?
Hound: We better head over to Chaos' pad, since it'll be dark by the time we get there.
Sabor: Yeah, we'll spend the night there, and head out tomorrow.
*2 hours later*
Hound: *Breathing hard* Almost *pant* there.
Pmac: I hope he's home.
Sabor: Yeah. Hey, isn't tonight the Packers @ Redskins game?
Hound: Yeah, and Chaos has that new plasma screen tv!
Pmac: Where's Tyk?
Sabor: He stayed behind to clean up his house.
Hound: Look! We're here!!
Pilot: *Lands Arwing* Hey, what'd I miss?
Sabor: Nothing. How long did it take you to get here?
Pilot: About a minute, why?
Pmac, Hound, and Sabor: *Glare at Pilot*
Chaos: Hey, guys, come on in!
*They sit down and watch the game*
Announcer: And Farve throws a long pass, intercepted! The 'Skins have the ball! The 20, the 10, the- *Static*
Pmac: WTF??
Pilot: What happened?!?
Sabor: Hey, look in the static! It looks like a face!
All but Chaos: GAH!!! *Hide behind sofa*
Chaos: *Aims Shaodow Rifle at the screen* Who or what are you?
Ace: *Static* Shshshhhshs-Guys! Can y'all hear me? Guys! This is Ace. C'mon, talk to me!
All but Chaos: AAhhhhh! Ace is calling from the beyond!
Chaos: Prove that you are Ace. And what's with the static?
Ace: Kick your old TV, Chaos! It'll work.
Chaos: *Kicks TV*
*The static dissapears. Ace is standing in front of a crashed, smoldering Arwing. The background is black and grey, like a cave.*
Ace: Believe me now? Put that pea-shooter down!
Chaos: *Lowers gun* Yep. That's Ace. Y'all come out.
All: *Crawl out of the sofa*
Ace: Anyway, I'm calling using my gun camera and A/V reciever. I'm still in the area where y'all fought yesterday. I have enough supplies to last for seven days. *A red flash blinds Ace* Unless "They" get me first.
Pilot: What "they"?
Ace: *Leaves camera, draws gun, and kills a demon-like creature. *Returns to the camera*
Hound: What the #$%^%$ was that?
Ace: I don't know. This place is just like the message board during the day, but at night this thing turns into a living hell. I think it has something to do with that black shadow that left Temple yesterday. It possesed this board.
Pmac: So that thing did this?
Ace: It's the only way I can figure it. I think that I'm in the PS2 server in GameFAQs HQ. Y'all have to find a way to get in and save me within one week. Or until the creatures get me. I hope y'all got that. *Big Red Flash* This is a big one. Ace out.
*Static*
Pilot: You heard him. We start first thing tomorrow.
To Be Continued
Next time:
Will they save Ace?
Will Ace live?
Will Tyk clean his house good?
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Post by ArwingPilot28 on Jul 22, 2006 20:34:05 GMT -5
Wow! that was a great story, awesome ending,it was funny, i just loved it! *gives another standing ovation*
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Post by foxhound on Jul 22, 2006 21:00:25 GMT -5
*This Story is Kicking @ss! Loving it!
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Jul 23, 2006 15:36:22 GMT -5
W00t!!! I thought up that idea for 2 dang days before I posted its final edition. I usually make this topic really, REALLY funny, but since my life is in y'all's hands, I have a tendency to get very nervous.
And y'all didn't know y'all's was a word, did you?
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Post by tyk9293 on Jul 23, 2006 18:00:33 GMT -5
make it so that im missing... well, i'll make it...
I KNOW!!! h/o im gonna post it
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Post by tyk9293 on Jul 23, 2006 18:27:08 GMT -5
ok... im gonna make 1 AFTER another person does... but DO NOT put what happens to Ace or me, and dont put what the black shadow possesses
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Post by pmac on Jul 23, 2006 23:20:48 GMT -5
when ur missing we make sure we dont find u!
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Jul 24, 2006 11:39:03 GMT -5
...We're waiting, Tyk...
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Post by pmac on Jul 24, 2006 18:15:55 GMT -5
quit modding my posts TYK!
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Post by tyk9293 on Jul 25, 2006 17:47:19 GMT -5
no... someone go BEFORE me... so i can do it right... & Pmac... sorry, u made me sound like a little kid
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Post by pmac on Aug 2, 2006 10:05:42 GMT -5
They set off to the GFAQS Ps2 board
Sabor: Pmac, why do u get to be the leader?
Pmac:cuz i like green colored tissue paper and cottage cheese.
Hound: XD
Pilot: Shut up guys look!
Chaos: OMG is that Tom Cruise?
*Pilot runs to Cruise*
Piloit: Hi uh....Mr. Cruise ummm my girlfriend really luvs ur work Yea can u put on that autograph her name? Uh yea. Her name is ARWING PILOT uhhh yea thats her name
Tom Cruise: Your a Jerk!
Sabor cuts off Toms head
Pmac: Hey boys is that a Dairy Queen in the distance?
Chaos: yea lets get some chow
*they go to the front desk*
* little does pilot know that his girlfried works at the frdont desk*
*Pilot jumps over counter and starts makin out all over her...
Sabor: DO U GUYS HAVE TO DO THAT EVERY DAY?
Pilot: .......y........e..s......
Hound: Can we have a Casheir here?
will they find ace?
what food will they get?
do pilot and his girlfriend have to make out whenever they see each other?s
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Post by ArwingPilot28 on Aug 2, 2006 10:23:45 GMT -5
XD, u made me sound like im in love with Tom Cruise! lol ;D
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Post by pmac on Aug 2, 2006 10:31:43 GMT -5
yep that was the joke my friend
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Aug 2, 2006 12:46:43 GMT -5
Hahahahaha!!!! Now, I am in the mood for some comical stories!!! Here Goes!!!:
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Aug 2, 2006 13:17:54 GMT -5
(In the PS2 Board) Middle of the Day... Ace: @#$% this is boring!!!! I have 5 days left to live, and those fools are probably goofing off. And If I know Pilot, he's making out with his girlfriend. Bah! Enough of this! *Ace reaches inside of his black and red flight suit* *Pulls out a glowing black emerald* Ace: Good. My shadow chaos emerald survived. Maybe now I can see what the others are up to. *Holds Emerald high* Chaos.....Possesion!!!!!! *The emerald glows brightly and Ace's body falls to the ground* Ace: *A transparent form of Ace flies pout of Ace's body*Gah... That is always painful. Anyway, to the real world! Chaos...Control!!! *Ace dissappers* ~~~~~ (At the DQ in the real world) Pilot: Ummm.....ohhh......Hold.......oh.....on.....guys...... Pmac: *Pulls Pilot off of his gf* Quit! We got stuff to do! Pilot: Awww... Hound: I'll take 12 grill burgers supreme. Others: 0_o?? Hound: What? I haven't ate since Breakfast. Chaos: Hey! Why haven't I been in this story yet? *They all order and sit down for a nice meal. 5 minutes later...* Sabor: Gwwaakk! *His eyes turn red* Pmac: Sabor! You alright? Sabor: ... Pmac: Sabor!! Sabor: ... Hound: *Gives Sabor heimliech maneuver* Sabor: Cough...Hack... *In a voice that isn't Sabor's:* Will you stop that!! Others: 0_o? Chaos: Calm down, I've seen this before. (To Sabor) Who are you, and what did you do to Sabor?!? Sabor: Don't get your panties in a knot, Chaos. I'm Ace. Pmac: How can that be! That is Sabor and Ace is in the GameFAQs PS2 server. Or is he. Sabor: While I'm possesing Sabor, I shall be called "Sacebor". And my Arwing's access code is: 8492164ACE_92. Would anyone else know that? Hound: Just believe him for now. It isn't the first time Ace has done something this creepy. Sacebor: *Pulls a black emerald out of thin air* Chaos, you being an emerald expert may recognise this as the "8th chaos emerald". It's real name is the Shadow Choas Emerald, and it allows the bearer to use chaos abilities that the other 7 aren't strong enough to. Chaos: So you held this emerald all this time, huh? Sacebor: Yep. Anyway, I must return to my body, in the Server. Quit eating and get me outta there! There's no time for games! Farewell! *Chaos Controls out of Sabor's body* Sabor: *Collapses into his Ketchup puddle beside the fries* To Be Continued... Next time: Will they save Ace? Will Sabor wake up? (Yes, I wouldn't kill him!) Rai: I won my lawsuit!!! I just can't figure out how to put it on. It is a "suit", isn't it? Will Rai go to the same DQ and fall in love with Pilot's girl? (He'd better not, pilot is the one with the arwing!!) Will I ever shut up? (Yes.) |
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Post by blacksabor on Aug 2, 2006 16:23:18 GMT -5
LMAO that was funny Sacebor lol I hate ketchup with my frys but that works!! keep it up! and nice that your finally back
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Post by tyk9293 on Aug 2, 2006 16:31:51 GMT -5
nvm me posting guys...
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Post by blacksabor on Aug 2, 2006 16:34:27 GMT -5
hell i would post but i';m so busy with GW and my story which is like 2 posts from 7 pages long! i couldn't have time and ppl keep begging me to update it right now *stares at tyk and hound*
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Post by foxhound on Aug 2, 2006 20:05:17 GMT -5
hell i would post but i';m so busy with GW and my story which is like 2 posts from 7 pages long! i couldn't have time and ppl keep begging me to update it right now *stares at tyk and hound* Hmmmm....I would say yes But it worries me That u won't concentrate enough On GW stories N the real game also! but if u can then do it! N STOP STARING AT ME!!!! >_> |
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