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Post by blacksabor on Oct 9, 2006 18:31:08 GMT -5
Hey Fed! This is my new story i have been writing because my old one went down the drain and wouldn't make sence anymore sence hound left so i decided to right this story about how Ace and I got the Holy Chaos Emerald and Shadow Chaos Emerald, and the HUGE adventure getting them! so here we go!
Let's get this party started!
It was an ordinary afternoon for the Fox Fed, the arwings were flying the blackbull was sleeping and blah blah blah Ace and Sabor were playing their new two player sonic on the fed gamecube with a Fox Skin. "Jump over the red one......"Sabor said playing the GC "And...."Ace said also playing "WE GOT IT!" Sabor shouted while Ace and him did their secret swordsman handshake. "Hey, Sabor Wouldn't be great if chaos emeralds were real?" Ace said looking out the window "Yeah but," Sabor started to say while he was interupted by Rai " Letter you Sabor and Ace" he said giving the letter to Sabor who drew his sword and used it like a letteropenner.
I will write the rest later my mom is kicking me off
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 9, 2006 18:42:53 GMT -5
Looks like a good start. I wanna see what hapens. It's funny, the site dies down, a bunch of fanfics sprout up, but no one is here to read them, lol.
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Post by blacksabor on Oct 10, 2006 6:34:33 GMT -5
LMAO yeah well they'll be here when everyone stops being so damn busy
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 10, 2006 16:25:54 GMT -5
I hope you have a good story planned, 'cause we need something to keep this thing alive.
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Post by blacksabor on Oct 11, 2006 6:32:03 GMT -5
alright here we go Ace swiped the opened letter from Sabor "Hey!" Sabor said trying to get it back but ace was taller then him and it didn't work out. "Hold....on....i'll read it......outloud!" Ace said in between times sabor lunged for it. Sabor stopped and ace opened the letter fully. "wtf.....the letter are all mixed up and coded i can't read it!" Pilot walked in the room. "ha let me take a look at that!" Pilot said snatching it from Ace "damn tall......" Sabor said to himself "LOL this looks exactly like the coded spanish Hound loved so much!" Pilot said walking away and laughing still. They sat in silence until Ace Finally said "Alright i guess we have to sneak in hound's room" "yeah i know we better get some sleep set your alarm to 3 am and meet me at his room at 3:30" Sabor said standing up and punching in his code and entered his room. They met as planed, and They were dessed in pitch black (that's all sabor wears anyways) They went to his door and Sabor went up to the keyboard. "y'know this could just be a trap hound set up for us and it's gaurded with something to shock us or something" Sabor said looking towards ace. "Yeah but we won't know till we tried" Sabor reached for the keyboard again. "what would hound put for his code anyways......" he said to himself then typing in "PS3 rules Wii Drools" and the door opened. They looked at eachother and laughed their ass off. "Hound did always had poor judgement!" Ace said still laughing. After they calmed down. They peered into the room and waited as if their soul was being sucked in and they could do nothing about it. "So Ace, Go on in" Ace " ! No way, who knows what he has in there why don't you throw a Saber in there or something!" Ace said slightly scared "No way! these are my babies!" He replied looking at them "Don't you have like 6 spares!?" Ace asked with his arms crossed. "8 to be exact!" "T_T aren't they invinceble anyways?" Ace said annoyed "Yeah but no to a disinigrater ray!" Ace was really annoyed now, He took Sabor's Lefthanded sabor and threw it into the room and they both expected the worst, but nothing happened. "T_T omg.... they both tought and ace stepped in the room and triggered a spike trap door and sabor quickly grabbed him and pulled him up "Thanks, but why didn't your stupid saber trigger that!?" he said when he was all the way up. "Well the left handed one is alot lighter then my right-handed one because its my weak hand and i have to balance the weight so i can fight with both hands eqaully" he explained Ace sighed. "well at least i'm not dead!" he said looking into the pit. "Well my saber survived too!" Sabor said jumping over the pit and grabbed it and put in away. Sabor then walked towards a bookshelf and told ace "it's safe, come on in!" Ace did so and walked to another shelf "Hey i found some!" Ace said pulling a book and the shelf spun around and he was in a dark room. He felt for a string and he found on and pulled it to turn on the light. "Holy!" he said covering his mouth. To Be Continued I've got update #2 about ready but not quite i should have it tomorrow morning or friday morning.
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 12, 2006 17:59:40 GMT -5
Well, speaking of coded languages, it looks like this is written in code. But aside for that, it is looking really good. I wonder what Hound is hiding in there?
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Post by blacksabor on Oct 13, 2006 5:35:54 GMT -5
hound is hiding for pre tty messed up stuff in that not to mention funny all in this next update!
Ok Sry if the first two updates are REALLY weird but you know i SUCK at making a good beginning Which is like the most important part of the story but i just can't write them to make them at least semi-intresting. It gets REALLY good in the 3rd update tho!
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Post by blacksabor on Oct 13, 2006 6:05:21 GMT -5
update #2 Sabor picked a book off the shelf called "the secrets of spanish" and opened it. for the next 45 mins he sat at hound's desk an decoded it there not even notiving that ace had disapeared. Meanwhile Pmac and Tyk were up playing Halo 2 on the fed' s X-box on the 60" hi-def tv. They fought for awhile and then Tyk shot pmac;s banshee down with a rocketlauncher. "Game, Set, And Match!" Tyk said smiling turning the X-box off. Pmac turned it back on. "I wonder if Sabor will play with us this time he loves a good game." Pmac said getting up and knocking on Sabor's door. There was no answer. Tyk then knocked even harder. No Answer. Tyk pressed the enterkey on the keyboard and the door opened. Pmac laughed and was about to step in when tyk stopped him. "what, Let go the door's open!" Pmac said to tyk. "Yeah but Sabor used the keycode to disarm the boobytraps not the DOOR, How did you think i got it open so quick?" Tyk explained letting go of pmac. "heheheheh you said booby" Pmac replied picking his nose Tyk Sighed and took out an apple. "watch!" he said throwing the apple in and it was already diced, stuck by 6 arrows, and exploded before it even hit the ground. "HOLY! SH-" Pmac shouted while tyk covered his mouth. "shhhhhhhh." "don't wake anyone up!" During that, Ace was i n Hound's secret room. Ace turned on the lights and looked around "Holy!" he said covering his mouth. There was a bloody dead body hanging in there that looked an awful like the falco, krystal allaince Leader but it was too bloody to tell for sure. Ace held in his barf and an down a small hallway that seemed to have peepholes in every room. Ace looked in a random one. "Oh no not penguin's bathroom!!!" he said after looking in seeing penguin in a wet towel " EWWWWWWWWWwwwwwwwwwwww" He said outloud then penguin head him slightly and looked in his direction. Ace continued running through the halls holding in the puke. Sabor Finished decoding the message but couldn't seem to read it. "Stupid Spanish" he said to himself looking around "hey, where's ace?" A wrapped present was on the desk it read "From Ace To Sabor" Here you go pal it's what you always wanted! "OH BOY, HE GOT ME MY LITTLE PONY PLAYHOUSE KIT" (for a joke only) Sabor opened the box and saw a bottle of water, a pill on a plate, and A-1 sauce "Oooooooooooooooo Steak dinner! " he said pouring some water on the pill. The Pill expanded, and expanded , and expanded until it was 6 feet tall! "i'll get you for this later ace!" Sabor said drawing his swords "BRING IT!" he said lunging towards the Steak monster. Ace ran and ran through the hallways turned a corner and snacked right into a brick wall. 15 mins later ace sat up and felt his head "where am i?" he said to himself getting up. He looked through the nearby peep hole. The room was dark and a figure was sleeping in a green bed. "Rai's room mostlikely" he thought and he backtracked to the original secret room "I wish hound was hear i have a shitload of questions for him!" he thought to himself appouching the bookcase and he took the book and it flipped again and Ace fell on the floor face flat. Pmac heard a loud noise. "did you hear that?" he said looking around That's all i got time for it gets really good in update #3 cya!
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 14, 2006 20:02:47 GMT -5
Again, after deciphering the update, it's getting really good. Hound hides a lot of stuff. A secret passage with peepholes into Penguin's bathroom? Creepy...
And my room is really just an airlock. You step in, and you have two minutes of Air to figure out how to teleport to my actual room, or how to exit the airlock.
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Post by blacksabor on Oct 20, 2006 6:25:54 GMT -5
hehehe...........i lost my story folder and all the meterail in it >_> good new for zayah's revenge.....i have chapter 2 already typed
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Post by ArwingAce92 on Oct 20, 2006 20:16:33 GMT -5
That sucks. Anyway, I read Zeyah and it's getting good.
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Post by blacksabor on Oct 21, 2006 9:18:37 GMT -5
ty!
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